Wrote a poem! Tell me what y'all think.

[Myriad~Lapse]

It's so good...

...And I Still Do

You seem to act so loving
You seem to act so nice
But when you turn and look at me
Those feelings don't suffice
I knew you couldn't know me
I wish you didn't try
These chains you draped onto my heart will never let me fly

I say that you're so wonderful
I say that you're my light
But what I say won't matter
Since my thoughts are so contrite
So don't say that you love me
So don't say that you care
'Cause I don't want mirror who just faces me and stares

Then suddenly, you leave me
But what more did you mean?
Was it all just an act of yours?
Was it all just some scheme?
And then you kick me down
Though I try to block your words
But you tell me I'm better off accepting who you were

But it doesn't really matter
What you do or say to me
Without you I feel worthless
But without you, I am free
At first you were a saint
But now you are the worst
At first I had felt bless, but from now on I am cursed

You hacked my heart in two
But in what I seem to do...
With all regret, I won't forget
The fact that I loved you

[Whyntir]

Oh Jebus! This sounds like your talking to me! O.O

[Myriad~Lapse]

Oh, come ON. XD I wrote this during school, BEFORE we had any fights. XD I'm just saying it for whoever...oh, I know. Let me interperet it.

The first stanza represents the girl who feels the love from her partner isn't enough; that it's only a burden for her heart to know that the love can never be real enough to make her feel the same.

The second stanza represents the girl telling her lies; saying that she loves him back. But of course, she really doesn't in her mind. She wishes he would quit saying he loves her, because she feels like he's only echoing her words.

And then he leaves her. But she's confused; didn't he say he loved her? And while they are no longer together, he begins to point out everything that they were. So he says, "You know what I was to you! I was your world. I know you really loved me, or you wouldn't be asking yourself 'Why, why, why?"! So she tries to block it out, but she has to accept it...

But even though his words make sense, she feels it's not important. He could point out every little fact there is about there previous "love", but it's nothing because they aren't together anymore. So she loved him at first, but now she hates him.

She feels so betrayed, but for what her thoughts and actions are...she regrets ever loving him, but she'll never forget the fact that she loved him.

...And she still does.

[Mally]

Oh... i love this... i am about to cry now